Have you ever been compelled? Under a spell? From a protagonist who knows you far too well? Have you ever been undone by a slip of the tongue? And betrayed a side of you that felt hard-won? So we watch the water swell, from a Scottish hotel. Have you ever fell? Have you ever fell?
(Seriously, though. You learn a lot going minutely through someone else’s edit. Possibly the least useful of which is that actors often pull ridiculous faces when doing fight scenes.)
